Post by Big Brother (Christian) on Apr 7, 2009 0:03:12 GMT -4
Team Protege:
Do your kids enjoy making music. Are you tired of having to put out your pots and pans everytime they want to make noise. Well we have a new toy that will blow your mind! The rockin rockstar
set from fishers price. Your kid can jam whenever they please with this miniture rockstar set. This includes a guitar and a microphone so your kids can sing and play all of their favorite songs! The guitar and microphone have plug ins to your home pc so you can can upload you childs favorite songs onto them. When they turn the guitar on its almost as in they are jamming out to their favorite tunes! When they turn the microphone on they are singing along with their favorite songs. This toy will keep you and your kids happy and excited for a very long time. This product is best for ages 3-6. Go out and buy the rockin rockstar set from Fisher price!
COMMENTS: I really like your idea. The concept is great! However, I feel you did nit devlope it enough. it has too many loose ends. The presentation just feels.... incomplete. Also, the grammar and such is not good AT ALL. It is just a chunk of words, the presentation look could have been better. Also, there was very little talking going on with your team. Like no one had any real ideas to input.
Team Versacorp:
Welcome to our presentation. We are here to show you guys a toy that is varied in many cases and situations. It is a spin on a very old classic toy that everyone both boys and girls had when they were young. This product is furby but we are here to bring you the new and improved furby that will attract not only the young crowd but also in general for older kids that had one in the past and want to relive a pastime. Furbys took the world by storm big and small sizes from having baby furbies to having the original furby. People didnt notice at the time of somethings that could make the furbies expand and have more options with it oppose to just feeding and having it repeat what it always says. No one could understand the language and the constant procedure of having to feed it with ur finger or having something press its tongue to get fed. this new and improve furby will come complete with the original or baby furby whichever u choose to buy but also having like a bottle type thing to feed it but nothing to small cause it could cause a danger hazard. Also they will come with a dicitonary /translator to see exactly what they say (some parental help may be required). Also on top of the translator the furby would be able to understand some commands u can tell it and you could have the ability to talk to it. this would give kids the feeling of not only having a furry electronic animal (furby) but also having like a parent role which kids love to act older than they are. For an added bonus they will be able to change things about it and it style or a different accent on the furby through online and a specfic code found in the box as an ID number so this would lead to every furby to be one of a kind and the only one made like that. I hope u enjoyed this presentation and thanks you for your time.
COMMENTS: Well. I like the idea od taking an old toy and making it new, however I do NOT like the Furby idea. I think you oculd have picked better. Also, I feel that it is a little complex, with the dictionary and all. Also, your grammar and speling was not professional. I think that not enough is explained. How do you play with it? But, on the other hand, I LOVED the team work displayed. You guys were talking, bouncing ideas off each other, you worked together, it was great.
This was a really tough descion. You both had many pros and cons. However, this is about the pitch, and who had the best concept. With that said...
Do your kids enjoy making music. Are you tired of having to put out your pots and pans everytime they want to make noise. Well we have a new toy that will blow your mind! The rockin rockstar
set from fishers price. Your kid can jam whenever they please with this miniture rockstar set. This includes a guitar and a microphone so your kids can sing and play all of their favorite songs! The guitar and microphone have plug ins to your home pc so you can can upload you childs favorite songs onto them. When they turn the guitar on its almost as in they are jamming out to their favorite tunes! When they turn the microphone on they are singing along with their favorite songs. This toy will keep you and your kids happy and excited for a very long time. This product is best for ages 3-6. Go out and buy the rockin rockstar set from Fisher price!
COMMENTS: I really like your idea. The concept is great! However, I feel you did nit devlope it enough. it has too many loose ends. The presentation just feels.... incomplete. Also, the grammar and such is not good AT ALL. It is just a chunk of words, the presentation look could have been better. Also, there was very little talking going on with your team. Like no one had any real ideas to input.
Team Versacorp:
Welcome to our presentation. We are here to show you guys a toy that is varied in many cases and situations. It is a spin on a very old classic toy that everyone both boys and girls had when they were young. This product is furby but we are here to bring you the new and improved furby that will attract not only the young crowd but also in general for older kids that had one in the past and want to relive a pastime. Furbys took the world by storm big and small sizes from having baby furbies to having the original furby. People didnt notice at the time of somethings that could make the furbies expand and have more options with it oppose to just feeding and having it repeat what it always says. No one could understand the language and the constant procedure of having to feed it with ur finger or having something press its tongue to get fed. this new and improve furby will come complete with the original or baby furby whichever u choose to buy but also having like a bottle type thing to feed it but nothing to small cause it could cause a danger hazard. Also they will come with a dicitonary /translator to see exactly what they say (some parental help may be required). Also on top of the translator the furby would be able to understand some commands u can tell it and you could have the ability to talk to it. this would give kids the feeling of not only having a furry electronic animal (furby) but also having like a parent role which kids love to act older than they are. For an added bonus they will be able to change things about it and it style or a different accent on the furby through online and a specfic code found in the box as an ID number so this would lead to every furby to be one of a kind and the only one made like that. I hope u enjoyed this presentation and thanks you for your time.
COMMENTS: Well. I like the idea od taking an old toy and making it new, however I do NOT like the Furby idea. I think you oculd have picked better. Also, I feel that it is a little complex, with the dictionary and all. Also, your grammar and speling was not professional. I think that not enough is explained. How do you play with it? But, on the other hand, I LOVED the team work displayed. You guys were talking, bouncing ideas off each other, you worked together, it was great.
This was a really tough descion. You both had many pros and cons. However, this is about the pitch, and who had the best concept. With that said...
