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Post by Pgcool on Oct 19, 2009 20:37:14 GMT -4
My First Ever Original Series. Will post every Monday and Thursday!
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Post by Pgcool on Oct 19, 2009 20:38:52 GMT -4
Host Carter: 20 kids from all across America will travel here to Colorado for a brand new adventure. They have no idea what to expect... And neither do you! This is the start of a brand new series that may end up being the best reality show yet. This is The Ancient Shrine!
*Theme Song Starts*
20 Kids
*Shows The Group Of 20 On the Boat*
4 Teams
*Shows The Logos of Each Team*
Tough Challenges
*Shows A 5 people running through the forest*
Drama
*Shows A Girl Crying and covering her face*
1 Host
*Shows Carter*
1 Winner
*Shows all the contestants one by one*
This is... The Ancient Shrine Colorado!
*Shows The Board*
Host Carter: These 20 contestants are almost at their destination. They will live in 2 different huts and will be divided into 4 different teams. How will they get along? Find out!
*Camera Pans to The Front of The Boat*
Kathy: Hey I'm Kathy and I am 13
Richard: Hi I'm Richard and I'm 15. People say I am good looking. I say I know. I am here to win and I am not just a pretty face
Malaina: Hey I'm Malaina and I'm 14
Dylan: Was sup? I'm Dylan and I'm 15. I think I may be the cool one here. I am up to date on the newest trends and music... I think I will work well with my teammate...
Briana: Hey I'm Briana and I'm 15
Bryan: Hey I'm Bryan and I am 12 years old
Nicole: My name is Nicole and I am 15. I think I will do good in the physical challenges... I play soccer and basketball so I am pretty fit and prepared for this game...
Tyson: My name is Tyson and I am 15. I think I will be a favourite out here just cause of my name. I think people consider the name Tyson as a cool name... I think Tyson is a pretty dope name myself.
Lisa: Hey I'm Lisa and I'm 12. I want to prove to people that I am not the dumb, nerdy looking, young girl. I am pretty smart and strong if I set my mind to it. I think I have a pretty good chance in this game...
Carson: Carson, and 15.
*Shows The Back of The Boat*
Sammy: Yo Yo Yo! Sammy's in the house! I'm 12 years old and I am probably the coolest hippest girl out here.
Blaze: My name is Blaze and I'm 15. I am going to Blaze past everyone in this competition and win!
Tanya: Hey I'm Tanya and I am 15
Jim: Jim, and I am 14 years old.
Leslie: My name is Leslie and I'm 14. My brother Bone has prepared me for this completely. He was on a show just like this and ended up with the win. I am here to prove that I am just as strong!
Hennry: Hey I'm Hennry and I'm 15
Lola: Hi I'm Lola and I am 12
Logan: The names Logan and I'm 15
Lita: Hi I'm Lita and I am 12. I hope this doesn't turn into a popularity contest cause my whole life through Grade School has been a popularity contest and I can gurentee you High School will be just like that...
Dustin: Hey I'm Dustin and I am 15.
*Shows Boat Ariving at Colorado*
Blaze: Sweet!
Nicole: We're here!
Kathy: Awesome!
*Shows Contestants On the beach with Host Carter*
Host Carter: Welcome to Colorado and The Ancient Shrine!
*Everyone Claps*
Host Carter: Here's what will happen during the next 3 weeks. You will be split into 4 teams of 5
*Everyone looks around having an idea of who they want to be with*
Host Carter: Then each day there will be a challenge. Mostly immunity challenges where the winning team can choose another team that will go over there
*Carter Points and Everyone Looks*
Host Carter: That right their far across the island is the Ancient Shrine where the show got it's name from. After each challenge the chosen team will go there and there will be a vote and one person will randomly be eliminated... So go ahead and go to your huts and I will meet you back here for the team decision.
*Contestants run off*
Dustin: Are those our huts?
Carson: Their freaking awesome!
Kathy: They are wonderful!
Dustin *Confessional*: When I saw our huts I was stunned. They were beautiful. Well at least the outside was
*Dustin enters guys hut*
Dustin: You're kiding me! Wood beds? No way I'm not staying here!
Blaze: You're going to give up a chance for a grand prize just because you have to sleep on wood?
Dustin: I love wood!
Blaze: Uh Huh...
*In The Girls Huts*
Nicole: I'm so curious about the teams...
Kathy: Me to... I hope I get put on a strong team...
Lita: I hope me an Richard are together
Tanya: Me to! He is so dreamy.
Briana: To bad... He is mine
Sammy: No way gurlfriend! He has my name written all over him. And my kisses
Nicole *Confessional*: I admit... Richard is hot but seriously... I think I want him gone... I think the girls will be more focused in him then the game...
*Shows Contestants Meeting Carter on the beach*
Host Carter: Well everyone. It is time to divide you into the 4 teams. When I call your name move to this platform here. Dylan
*Dylan moves*
Host Carter: Blaze
*Blaze Moves and high fives Dylan*
Host Carter: Lita
Lita: Sweet!
*Lita Moves*
Host Carter: Lola
*Lola moves and Hugs Lita*
Lita *Confessional*: At that moment my heart stopped and I was thinking "Please Be Richard. Please Be Richard"
Host Carter: and Tyson
*Lita looks disappointed*
Lita *Confessional*: I guess Tyson is okay...
*Shows The First Team of Blaze, Dylan, Lita, Lola, and Tyson*
Host Carter: From this moment on you 5 are the Shark Team!
*They look proud*
Blaze: Sweet! We are sharks!
Host Carter: When I call your name stand on this platform here. Malaina
*Malaina moves*
Host Carter: Tanya
*Tanya and Malaina hug*
Host Carter: Hennry
*Hennry joins team*
Host Carter: Carson
*Hennry and Carson fist pound*
Host Carter: and... Kathy
Kathy: Yay!
*Kathy joins group as the camera pans to their team*
Host Carter: From this moment on you are the Scorpion Team!
Hennry: That works for me!
Host Carter: 2 more teams. When I call your name step on this platform. Dustin, Jim, Briana, Lisa
*They All Move*
Briana *Confessional*: Richard better join us!
Host Carter: And Richard!
Briana: Yes!
*Briana, and Lisa hug Richard*
Host Carter: You are now known as the Snake Team!
*Shows The Snake Team*
Host Carter: The rest of you... Leslie, Nicole, Bryan, Logan, and Sammy. Welcome to the Hawk team!
*They all hug and go on platform*
Host Carter: Well now we have the four teams... We are now having our first mission. Your team will be tied up and have to retrieve your team flag from inside the forest. The first team to get their team flag will win the power to send one team to The Ancient Shrine. Everyone ready?
*Everyone Nods*
Host Carter: Okay then! Let's get you tied up!
*Shows Teams Tied up and ready to start*
Host Carter: Okay teams! On your marks! Get set! Go!
*Teams run into the forest*
Host Carter: Their flags are seperated in different areas!
*Shows Snake Logo*
Dustin: Come on we can get this!
Richard: Just search for what we are looking for.
*Briana Stares at Richard*
Briana: I already found what I'm looking for
Jim: Focus!
*Shows Hawk Logo*
Leslie: We got this guys!
Bryan: We totally do!
Nicole: Just keep up everyone!
*Shows Scorpion logo*
Carson: Where could the flags be?
Malaina: No idea! Just keep looking!
*Shows Shark Logo*
Blaze: Anyone see it yet?
Dylan: Nope not yet...
Lita: Nothing...
Lola: Notta
Tyson: Wait there's a flag over there!
Blaze: Is it Shark?
*Shark team runs to flag*
Dylan: Dang! Hawk!
*Shows Snake Team Running*
Dustin: Come on! We got to win this!
Lisa: This is so hard! We have no idea where it could be!
Richard: Just keep searching!
*Shows Hawk Team*
Nicole: Where could it be?
Sammy: No idea!
Leslie: Could be anywhere...
*Shows Shark Team*
Dylan: Another flag!
Blaze: Hopefully this one is ours!
*Shark team runs to flag*
Lola: Yes!
Lita: Run back!
*Shark Team grabs flag and starts to run*
*Shows Carter at the beach as Shark team runs in with the flag*
Host Carter: Oh! *Takes Out Loudspeaker* Everyone come back in! Shark team has won!
*Everyone arrives in*
Host Carter: Okay! Shark team! You ended up winning the first challenge! You will be deciding which team will be heading to the Ancient Shrine. At the Ancient Shrine one person will be going home. Here is a map for each team.
*Host Carter hands out maps*
Host Carter: These are maps to get you to your new team camps... Meet back here in an hour and we will find out Shark Team's decision
*Shows Scorpion Logo*
Carson: We did really good today.
Malaina: We did didn't we...
Hennry: Hopefully we don't get sent to the Ancient Shrine...
Kathy: There's our camp!
Tanya: Sweet!
*Shows Snake Team in Their Camp*
Dustin: Who do you think they will send?
Richard: I think Hawk...
Lisa: ya... From what I heard they did really well...
*Hawk Team Talks in Their Camp*
Nicole: We did really good today.
Bryan: Ya... Considering we had no idea where the flag would be...
Leslie: Yup! Let's hope they don't send us tonight...
*Shark Team Talks at their huts*
Dylan: So who should we send?
Blaze: I don't know... Scorpion and Hawk both seem like strong teams...
Lita: Those are the two I would have said...
*Shark Team Talks more and makes a decision. Teams then meet Carter at beach*
Host Carter: Todays mission really proved who has the best speed and searching skills. Shark, you actually ended up finding two flag. The first of them being Hawk. When you found Hawk's flag did you think it would be impossible to keep searching for yours?
Lola: Well finding Hawks flag sort of gave us a little boost proving that it is very much possible to find the flags... When we found our flag I think we just burst into cheer because the search would be over...
Host Carter: Okay then... Now it is time to find out who you will be sending on the long walk across the beach to the Ancient Shrine. You have all packed your bags... And now five of you will take them and walk to the Ancient Shrine... Okay Tyson... This is all riding on you... Which team will be going to the Ancient Shrine?
Tyson: Well it is sort of hard to tell which team is strongest at this point but we looked at who was on each team... We figured that... Scorpion was the strongest. So Scorpion will be heading to The Ancient Shrine tonight...
*Carson looks shocked as Tanya and Kathy begin to cry and hug*
Host Carter: Okay! Scorpion team... Come with me to The Ancient Shrine... The rest of you head back to your camps...
*3 Teams Leave and Camera Pans to Scorpion and Carter walking to the Ancient Shrine*
*After a long walk they reach the Shrine*
Host Carter: This is the Ancient Shrine... This is the main place you do not want to be at... You are the first up here ever and are the first to know how this works... All of your names have already been written down on a piece of paper. In a moment you will all take a vote of who you want to leave. All the names written will be put into the shrine along with the 5 original names. The shrine will then randomly spit out a piece of paper. If that paper says your name then you are out. The rest will be safe... So Tanya go ahead and vote first...
*Tanya walks up to the shrine*
Tanya: I chose Hennry because to me he is the weakest person from our tribe and if he is gone I think we can do much better in challenges...
*Malaina walks up to the shrine*
Malaina: Kathy... You are for sure the weakest and we really don't need you...
*Kathy walks up to the shrine*
Kathy: Hennry... Me and Tanya are voting together tonight and agree that you are for sure the weakest...
*Carson walks up to the shrine*
Carson: Tanya... You are slowing down our team... That's all I can say...
*Hennry walks up to the shrine*
Hennry: Kathy... You were slow in todays challenge and if you weren't here I think we could have won the mission....
Host Carter: Okay! I will now put all the votes in the back of the Shrine along with the 5 original names..
*Host Carter Puts Votes In Back of Shrine*
Host Carter: Okay... The votes have been cast, the name that comes out will be going home. Once the name has been given the decision is final and the loosing person will take that boat over there to the sacred Loosers Island. Here we go.
*Host Carter Clicks a Button and The Shrine makes noise. A piece of paper comes out the front*
Host Carter: Okay let's open this up... Oh wow! Okay... The first person eliminated from The Ancient Shrine Colorado is...
*Everyone looks nervous*
Host Carter: Kathy!
*Kathy begins to cry again and covers her face. Her team comes to hug her*
Host Carter: Kathy... You played a wonderful game and you will not be forgotten. Thank you for playing. Kathy, the Shrine has spoken.
Kathy: Thanks Carter!
*Scorpion Team hugs Kathy*
*Kathy Leaves on Boat while waving. Team waves back*
Host Carter: Okay... Your team and the Shrine chose for Kathy to be out... Anyone could have really been out tonight... Go back to your camp and I will see you for tomorrows mission! Good night!
*Scorpion Team starts to walk back to camp*
Tanya *Confessional*: Awww... I really wanted Kathy to stay in... We were good friends and I think we could have done well together...
BONUS CLIP
Richard *Confessional*: Does it feel weird to have all the girls chasing me? Does it feel weird to have all the girls crazy about me? Does it feel weird that they all want to marry me? Haha! Don't make me laugh! That's what we were made for. It's life!
End of Episode 1
The Shark Team: Dylan, Blaze, Tyson, Lola, and Lita
The Scorpion Team: Tanya, Malaina, Carson, and Hennry
The Snake Team: Dustin, Jim, Richard, Lisa, and Briana
The Hawk Team: Nicole, Sammy, Leslie, Bryan, and Logan
*end credits begin*
Kathy: I think I learned from this experience to not trust everyone except your true friends... I thought my team really liked me but I guess I was wrong... I would definately do this again if I could... What an aweseome experience! |
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Post by Crazy James on Oct 31, 2009 15:32:54 GMT -4
Really good beginning and end. Host Carter needs to talk a little more realistic though.
Nonetheless, I'm interested on seeing an Episode 2...
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Post by Pgcool on Oct 31, 2009 15:36:42 GMT -4
The Shark Team: Dylan, Blaze, Tyson, Lola, and Lita
The Scorpion Team: Tanya, Malaina, Carson, and Hennry
The Snake Team: Dustin, Jim, Richard, Lisa, and Briana
The Hawk Team: Nicole, Sammy, Leslie, Bryan, and Logan
Host Carter: Last time on The Ancient Shrine... 20 kids arrived to Colorado where they would be split into 4 teams of 5. Once the teams were made the teams had to find their team flag in a forest. The Shark Team ended up getting their flag first. After a long decision they decided to send The Scorpion team to the Ancient Shrine. At the shrine Kathy and Hennry recieved the most votes. When all the votes plus 1 of each name (to give everyone the chance that they might be out) they were all added to the back of The Ancient Shrine. The name that came out was elimianted. Kathy was sent home after her name showed up. Today the final 19 players in their teams will compete in another Immunity Mission and another team will go to the Ancient Shrine... This is... The Ancient Shrine!
*Theme Song Starts*
20 Kids
*Shows The Group Of 20 On the Boat*
4 Teams
*Shows The Logos of Each Team*
Tough Challenges
*Shows A 5 people running through the forest*
Drama
*Shows A Girl Crying and covering her face*
1 Host
*Shows Carter*
1 Winner
*Shows all the contestants one by one*
This is... The Ancient Shrine Colorado!
*Shows the Scorpion Team in Their Camp*
Tanya: Hey, I'm just wondering... Why Kathy?
Malaina: Well she is definately the weakest...
Tanya: Yes but she would do well in the knowledge challenges...
Hennry: Look... The decision has been made... Everyone had the chance of going home... We don't even know if Kathy got the most votes... For all. we know she got none except for the starting vote...
Tanya: Ya... Right... Pretty sure she was voted...
*Shows Shark Team Talking*
Blaze: We definately have to win today or we will be sent...
Lita: Yes...
*Shows The Shark, Snake, and Hawk team walking in*
Host Carter: Scorpion team! Come on in!
*Scorpion team walks in and no one looks shocked*
Host Carter: Kathy, eliminated in the last Shrine meeting... Well today one more person will join her at the looser island. Your team will be tied to a rope that has been knotted around 3 logs. You will have to going in and out of those logs trying to get the rope completely untied. When your rope is fully untied you will be able to run far enough to reach your team flag and bring it back to me. First team to bring me their team flag will win the power to send a team to The Ancient Shrine.
*Everyone Looks Nervous*
Host Carter: Okay! Get ready!
*Shows Teams Tied Up*
Host Carter: Scorpion team has 4 players and everyone else has 5! Get ready! Get set! Go!
*Teams Start Going Through The Logs*
Host Carter: Hennry is just throwing himself through the logs!
*Shows Hennry jumping through the logs*
Dustin: Come on Jim! Go through!
Jim: This is to tough!
Richard: Keep going!
*Shows One Team Running To Try and Get The Flag but falling*
Host Carter: Oh! The shark team attempting to get the flag but don't make it!
Nicole: I think we're good!
*Hawk Team Runs and Grabs Flag and comes back*
Host Carter: Ohhh! As simple as that and Hawk wins! After going in and out of the logs Hawk team wins the power to send one team to The Ancient Shrine. Everyone head back to camp and meet back here in an hour...
*Shows Hark Logo*
Nicole: What do you all think?
Bryan: Well for me there are two ways to think about it... Send the Sharks because they are the strongest or send Scorpion to make them even less compeition...
Leslie: Both of those sound logical to me...
Sammy: So what will we be doing?
*Hawk team keeps on discussing while Shark team talks*
Dylan: They are probably sending us tonight...
Lola *Confessional*: Seeing as how we won yesterday our whole team is pretty sure that we are headed to the Ancient Shrine...
*Shows Teams Walking into the beach*
Host Carter: Okay... Today mission. Shark team thought they had it but they didn't have enough rope to make it all the way. Hawk team ended up winning... So Logan... Who is going to The Ancient Shrine?
Logan: Well there were two logical ways to go... The way we chose was... The Shark Tribe!
*Everyone except Shark teams looks happy*
Host Carter: Okay! Shark team... Come with me to The Ancient Shrine... The rest of you head back to your camps...
*3 Teams Leave and Camera Pans to Shark and Carter walking to the Ancient Shrine*
*After a long walk they reach the Shrine*
Host Carter: This is the Ancient Shrine... This is the main place you do not want to be at... All of your names have already been written down on a piece of paper. In a moment you will all take a vote of who you want to leave. All the names written will be put into the shrine along with the 5 original names. The shrine will then randomly spit out a piece of paper. If that paper says your name then you are out. The rest will be safe... So Dylan go ahead and vote first...
*Dylan Walks Up To The Shrine*
Dylan: I pick Blaze because I think he may be one of the weaker players...
*Blaze Walks Upto The Shrine*
Blaze: Lola... You are very weak and we could do so much better without you...
*Tyson Walks Up*
Tyson: Blaze... Not strong enough for our team...
*Lola Walks Up*
Lola: Blaze...
*Lita Walks Up*
Lita: Blaze!
Host Carter: Okay! I will now put all the votes in the back of the Shrine along with the 5 original names..
*Host Carter Puts Votes In Back of Shrine*
Host Carter: Okay... The votes have been cast, the name that comes out will be going home. Once the name has been given the decision is final and the loosing person will take that boat over there to the sacred Loosers Island. Here we go.
*Host Carter Clicks a Button and The Shrine makes noise. A piece of paper comes out the front*
Host Carter: Okay let's open this up... Oh wow! Okay... The second person eliminated from The Ancient Shrine Colorado is...
*Everyone looks nervous*
Host Carter: Lola!
*Everyone Looks Shocked and Lola Begins To Cry*
*Shark Team Comes To Hug Lola*
Host Carter: Lola... You played a great game and you will not be forgotten. Thank you for playing. Lola, the Shrine has spoken.
Lola: Thanks guys!
*Lola Leaves on Boat while waving. Team waves back*
Host Carter: Well it was anyones game tonight... Who knows how the votes turned out but it was probably more votes for Lola... Go back to your camp and I will see you for tomorrows mission! Good night!
Lita *Confessional*: Wow! I really thought Blaze was going... This game is full of surprises... I am going to have to work extra hard to stay in this game because I am the only girl left on my team...
End of Episode 1
The Shark Team: Dylan, Blaze, Tyson, and Lita
The Scorpion Team: Tanya, Malaina, Carson, and Hennry
The Snake Team: Dustin, Jim, Richard, Lisa, and Briana
The Hawk Team: Nicole, Sammy, Leslie, Bryan, and Logan
*end credits begin*
Lola: That was a big surprise... I thought I was popular in my team but either my team thought otherwise or luck was not in my favour when it came down to The Shrines decision... |
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